Did the final editing pass through "A Voice in the Darkness". Cleared up a few lingering grammatical screw-ups, and moved a conversation from the end to earlier in the story, where it makes more sense. I'm liking where the story is now.
The final word count for "A Voice in the Darkness" is 12,794 words.
Oh, and the stories of Mandalay Jones and Mira Frayne are not finished.