Wednesday, March 28, 2012

How Do You Forget A Completed Story?

I'm really beginning to worry about my memory...

I have a story called "A God To Dance With", which concerns immortal archaeologist Scott Madigan as he investigates the burial site of Querahl-tan, the "Sleeping God" of the planet Stelvra.  Along the way, Scott's lover, Zoe Baird, is killed and her body is possessed by the being known by the Stelvrans as Querahl-tan, who's really an energy being known as a Dolwa.  It's one of my favorites, though I've had trouble convincing editors of its worth.

As part of a rejection letter, one editor commented that "A God To Dance With" seemed like the first chapter of a longer story.  I hadn't been thinking that way when I wrote the story, but after reading that comment, I started thinking about what else Scott and the Dolwa (who used Zoe's name as well as her form).  I had come up with about a dozen stories that were planned to be combined into an anthology titled A Bright Symmetry.

I completed one other story, had two others about 90% finished...and put the project aside to work on other things.  Over time, I forgot about them.

Yes, you read that right.  I forgot about a completed story.

And I thought Sam Beckett had holes in his memory.*

So I'm going to tackle the project again, still under the collective title of A Bright Symmetry.  I'm going to complete the two incomplete stories, write a short prologue piece that'll come before "A God To Dance With" and make that an epublishing project.

By the way, the answer's yes.  The character of Scott Madigan here is the same Scott Madigan from the vampire novel, nearly twenty-five hundred years later.  Georges and Brynna make a cameo appearance in here, too.

*That's a Quantum Leap reference, for those who don't know.  Go to Wikipedia and look it up.

So here's three of the characters, Scott, Zoe and Arcadia Ryan...


Scott Madigan

Name:  Scott Madigan
Race:  Human (Immortal)

Age:  41 (given)/2797 (actual, as of 4498)
Date of Birth:  4457 (given)/1701 (actual)
Place of Birth:  Unnamed North American city (given)/Dublin, Ireland (actual)
Citizenship:  Scott is a citizen of the Federation
Legal Status:  No criminal record
Relatives:  Ian Madigan (father, deceased), Jennifer Madigan (mother, deceased)

Height:  175.26 cm (5’9”)
Weight:  75.57k (160 lbs)
Eye Color:  Blue
Hair Color:  Blonde
Religion:  Catholic
Intelligence:  Above average
Strength:  Normal
Stamina:  Normal
Durability:  Normal
Agility:  Normal
Reflexes:  Normal

Profession/Rank (Current):  Freelance mission coordinator, archaeologist, adventurer
Profession/Rank (Former):  Soldier, government security agent, numerous others
Current Alias:  None
Former Alias:  None
Personal Weaponry:  Ariflex Mark II Pulser
Special Weaponry:  Various, as needed
Other Weaponry:  Various, as needed
Transportation:  Various, as needed
Usual Base of Operations:  Kevelan

Friends/Allies/Confidants:  Brynna Alexander, Colin Alexander, Jess Alexander, Zoe Baird, Lauren Chedraki, Nathan Chedraki, Anastasia Krestyanova, Lily McConnell, Arcadia Ryan, Georges Severin, Lisa Stennis, Trebinocosalliche
Enemies:  Jha’na, Telen’na
Skills:  Archaeology, martial arts, computers, flying, security specialist
Special Abilities:  Scott is immortal; he was born in the year 1701 and hasn’t aged since the year 1742.  Because of this, minor injuries heal extremely quickly.  Short of total disintegration, his body will repair any damage done to it.
Source of Special Abilities:  Unknown
Interests/Hobbies:
Attitude:  Being immortal has begun to weigh heavily on Scott Madigan.  He is at times sullen and reserved, observing situations for a long time before acting.  Even when the life of a friend or a loved one is at stake, Madigan won’t take any rash action.  This has sometimes backfired on him, as he has at times waited too long, resulting in loss of life.  He is a loyal friend who will speak his mind if he has something to say.  Madigan has known some of the most famous names in history:  Caralynn Adrasteia, Lin Sillo, Tamara Bauren among others.


Zoe Baird

Name:  Zoe Baird/Quérahl-tan
Race:  Human/Dolwa

Age:  34/~600,000 years
Date of Birth:  4464/Unknown
Place of Birth:  Kevelan/P’Thresen Sector (The Arc of Heaven)
Citizenship:  Zoe is a citizen of the Federation
Legal Status:  No criminal record
Relatives:  Jonas Baird (father, deceased), Kamila Baird (mother, deceased)

Height:  167.64 cm (5’6”)
Weight:  60.33 k (133 lbs)
Eye Color:  Blue/Mahogany
Hair Color:  Red
Religion:  Fundamentalist/Atheist
Intelligence:  Above average/Genius
Strength:  Normal
Speed:  Normal
Stamina:  Normal
Durability:  Normal
Agility:  Normal
Reflexes:  Normal

Profession/Rank (Current):  Freelance mission specialist, archaeologist, adventurer
Profession/Rank (Former):  Observer, savior of the Stelvran race, “Sleeping God”
Current Alias:  None
Former Alias:  None
Personal Weaponry:  Ariflex Mark II Pulser/None
Special Weaponry:  Various, as needed/None
Other Weaponry:  Various, as needed/None
Transportation:  Various, as needed/Self-transportation
Usual Base of Operation:  Kevelan

Friends/Allies/Confidants:  Brynna Alexander, Colin Alexander, Jess Alexander, Lauren Chedraki, Nathan Chedraki, Scott Madigan, Arcadia Ryan, Georges Severin, Trebinocosalliche
Enemies:  Jha’na, Telen’na
Skills:  Archaeology, martial arts, computers, flying, dancing
Special Abilities:  In her original human form, Zoe possessed no special abilities other than an empathic sense that helped her understand Scott Madigan.  After her death and merging with the Dolwa known as Quérahl-tan, she possessed the attributes of the Dolwa:  Telepathy, telekinesis, energy manipulation, unassisted transportation and unassisted time travel.  She also has the ability to rearrange matter on a sub-atomic level and can “freeze” people in time.
Source of Special Abilities:  These are the natural abilities of the Dolwa and were attained by fusing with Quérahl-tan.
Interests/Hobbies:
Attitude:


Arcadia Ryan

Name:  Arcadia Ryan
Race:  Human (Immortal)

Age:  33 (given)/2535 (actual)
Date of Birth:  4465 (given)/1963 (actual)
Place of Birth:  Unnamed North American City (given)/New York City, New York (actual)
Citizenship:  Arcadia is a citizen of the Federation
Legal Status:  No criminal record
Relatives:  Unnamed parents (deceased), Amy Ryan (adopted daughter)

Height:  170.18 cm (5’7”)
Weight:  60.33 k (130 lbs)
Eye Color:  Blue
Hair Color:  Blonde
Religion:  Atheist
Intelligence:  Above average
Strength:  Normal
Speed:  Normal
Stamina:  Normal
Durability:  Normal
Agility:  Normal
Reflexes:  Normal

Profession/Rank (Current):  Master of the freighter Sentinel; freelance spacer
Profession/Rank (Former):  Adventurer, soldier, pilot, numerous others
Current Alias:  None
Former Alias:  None
Personal Weaponry:  Ariflex Mark II Pulser
Special Weaponry:  Various, as needed
Other Weaponry:  Various, as needed
Transportation:  Freighter Sentinel, various support craft, as needed
Usual Base of Operations:  Mobile

Friends/Allies/Confidantes:  Brynna Alexander, Zoe Baird, Lauren Chedraki, Nathan Chedraki, Anastasia Krestyanova, Lily McConnell, Georges Severin, Lisa Stennis
Enemies:  MilSci
Skills:  Marital arts, computers, flying, strategy and tactics
Special Abilities:  Arcadia is immortal; she was born in the year 1963 and hasn’t aged since the year 1997.  Because of this, minor injuries heal extremely quickly.  Short of total disintegration, her body will repair any amount of damage done to it.
Source of Special Abilities:  Unknown
Interests/Abilities:
Attitude:

...And It's Been Finished For How Long?

A few years bacck, I completed a novel titled On A Cold Wind.  It concerned the life and times of Caralynn Adrasteia, an artificially created human working for government security in the late twenty-second century.  It was to be the first of four novels, covering a year in Carly's life as she struggles against Efhram Bartok, another Enhanced Human, one who wants to start a revolution.

I had completed the novel, liked how it had turned out then put it aside for what I thought would be the usual waiting period before I started editing.

And then, I completely forgot about it.

I've been doing that a lot lately.

So I've started going through the novel, doing a line-by-line edit on the story.  Hopefully this draft won't take too long to get through.  And, hopefully, I won't forget it again when this edit is finished.

So here's the three main characters, Caralynn Adrasteia, her partner/lover Murphy Greenfield, and the main protagonist, Ehfram Bartok...


Caralynn Adrasteia (Carly)

Name:  Caralynn Adrasteia
Race:  Enhanced Human (Consectetur Humana)

Age:  15 (actual, as of 23 October, 2189)/early 30’s (apparent)
Date of Birth:  23 April, 2174
Place of Birth:  Gregor Mendel Genetic Research Facility, Albany, New York NorAm, Earth
Citizenship:  Carly is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status:  No criminal record
Relatives:  Martin Carleson (surrogate father), the other forty-nine members of Batch JCSeven

Height:  182.88 cm (6’)
Weight:  70.31 kg (155 lbs)
Eye Color:  Gray
Hair Color:  White
Religion:  Atheist
Intelligence:  Genius
Strength:  Enhanced Human
Speed:  Enhanced Human
Stamina:  Enhanced Human
Durability:  Enhanced Human
Agility:  Enhanced Human
Reflexes:  Enhanced Human

Profession/Rank (Current):  Government security agent, adventurer
Profession/Rank (Former):  Farm hand
Current Alias:  Snowflake
Former Alias:  N/A
Personal Weaponry:  Waller-Jameson CZSeventy-Five Phased Plasma Pistol; various others, as needed, provided by EarthGov Security
Usual Base of Operations:  Division Five Center, Oneonta, New York, NorAm, Earth

Friends/Allies/Confidants:  Xavier Bernard, James Browning, Leah Buchanan, Cheryl Dolan, Teresa Frankel, Murphy Greenfield, Harmony Moore, Melody Moore, Alexandra Sinclair, Bryan Styles, Marissa Tolliver
Enemies:  Efhram Bartok, Purists
Skills:  Carly is a skilled investigator, often noticing details others miss.  She is skilled in several martial arts, is an expert marksman and a good pilot.
Special Abilities:  Because she is an Enhanced Human, Carly is stronger than the average human (approximately  four times stronger).  Her senses are also better than average.  Her eyes are about as good as a cat’s, giving her excellent night vision.  (Like a cat’s eyes, Enhanced Human eyes have tapetum lucidum, which reflects light that passes through the retina back into the eye, increasing the eye’s sensitivity to dim light).  Carly can hear a broader range of frequencies and can pick a single voice out of a crowd.  Her sense of smell is so acute, she can recognize most people by scent.
Source of Special Abilities:  Genetic engineering
Interests/Hobbies:


Murphy Greenfield

Name:  Murphy Greenfield
Race:  Human

Age:  32 (as of 23 October, 2189)
Date of Birth:  17 July, 2157
Place of Birth:  Brisbane, Australia, Earth
Citizenship:  Murphy is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status:  No criminal record
Relatives:  Jamie Greenfield (father, deceased), Zena Greenfield (mother, deceased), Roddy Greenfield (grandfather)

Height:  180.34 (5’11”)
Weight:  79.38 kg (175 lbs)
Eye Color:  Blue
Hair Color:  Sandy Blonde
Religion:  Agnostic
Intelligence:  Above Average
Strength:  Normal
Speed:  Normal
Stamina:  Normal
Durability:  Normal
Agility:  Normal
Reflexes:  Normal

Profession/Rank (Current):  Government security agent, adventurer
Profession/Rank (Former):  None
Current Alias:  Sand
Former Alias:  N/A
Personal Weaponry:  Waller-Jameson CZSeventy-Five Phased Plasma Pistol; various others, as needed, provided by EarthGov Security
Usual Base of Operations:  Division Five Center, Oneonta, New York, NorAm, Earth

Friends/Allies/Confidants: Caralynn Adrasteia, Xavier Bernard, James Browning, Leah Buchanan, Cheryl Dolan, Teresa Frankel, Harmony Moore, Melody Moore, Alexandra Sinclair, Bryan Styles, Marissa Tolliver
Enemies:  Efhram Bartok, Purists
Skills:  Murphy is a skilled agent, trained in several martial arts.  He is also an expert marksman and a good pilot.  He is a good leader, and will often defuse a tense situation with a quick joke.
Special Abilities:  N/A
Source of Special Abilities:  N/A
Interests/Hobbies:


Efhram Bartok

Name:  Efhram Bartok
Race:  Enhanced Human (Consectetur Humana)

Age:  15 (actual, as of 23 October, 2189)/early 30’s (apparent)
Date of Birth:  22 September, 2174
Place of Birth:  Adam Welles Research Facility, San Francisco, California, NorAm, Earth
Citizenship:  Bartok is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status:  Convicted murderer
Relatives:  The other forty-nine members of Batch ANFifty

Height:  177.8 cm (5’10”)
Weight:  72.57 kg (160 lbs)
Eye Color:  Blue
Hair Color:  Black
Religion:  Atheist
Intelligence:  Genius
Strength:  Enhanced Human
Speed:  Enhanced Human
Stamina:  Enhanced Human
Durability:  Enhanced Human
Agility:  Enhanced Human
Reflexes:  Enhanced Human

Profession/Rank (Current):  N/A
Profession/Rank (Former):  N/A
Current Alias:  N/A
Former Alias:  N/A
Personal Weaponry:  Various, as needed
Usual Base of Operations:  Mobile

Friends/Allies/Confidants:
Enemies:  Caralynn Adrasteia, Xavier Bernard, Murphy Greenfield
Skills:  Bartok is a skilled leader and a persuasive speaker.
Special Abilities:  Because he is an Enhanced Human, Bartok is stronger than the average human (approximately  four times stronger).  His senses are also better than average.  His eyes are about as good as a cat’s, giving him excellent night vision.  (Like a cat’s eyes, Enhanced Human eyes have tapetum lucidum, which reflects light that passes through the retina back into the eye, increasing the eye’s sensitivity to dim light).  Bartok can hear a broader range of frequencies and can pick a single voice out of a crowd.  His sense of smell is so acute, he can recognize most people by scent.
Source of Special Abilities:  Genetic engineering
Interests/Hobbies:

Thursday, March 1, 2012

Rewriting Complete...Time To Move Forward

So I've spent the last month or so rewriting the last five chapters of Before the Dawn and all of "The Fault Lies Not..."  I'm finally ready again to start moving forward, to drive each project to their completion.

So, as of right now, Before the Dawn stands at 66,229 words, 13,771 words short of my arbitrary goal of 80,000 words.

"The Fault Lies Not..." stands at 12,423 words.  I had to make a few changes to the plot line:  Lin is still going to end up being a captive of the killer she and Vincent have been searching for, but she's no longer going to be thrown off the roof of the building.  I've got a more logical way for the killer to take her hostage.