I had completed the novel, liked how it had turned out then put it aside for what I thought would be the usual waiting period before I started editing.
And then, I completely forgot about it.
I've been doing that a lot lately.
So I've started going through the novel, doing a line-by-line edit on the story. Hopefully this draft won't take too long to get through. And, hopefully, I won't forget it again when this edit is finished.
So here's the three main characters, Caralynn Adrasteia, her partner/lover Murphy Greenfield, and the main protagonist, Ehfram Bartok...
Caralynn
Adrasteia (Carly)
Name: Caralynn Adrasteia
Race: Enhanced Human (Consectetur Humana)
Age: 15 (actual, as of 23 October, 2189)/early
30’s (apparent)
Date of Birth: 23 April, 2174
Place of Birth: Gregor Mendel Genetic Research Facility,
Albany, New York NorAm, Earth
Citizenship: Carly is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status: No criminal record
Relatives: Martin Carleson (surrogate father), the other
forty-nine members of Batch JCSeven
Height: 182.88 cm (6’)
Weight: 70.31 kg (155 lbs)
Eye Color: Gray
Hair Color: White
Religion: Atheist
Intelligence: Genius
Strength: Enhanced Human
Speed: Enhanced Human
Stamina: Enhanced Human
Durability: Enhanced Human
Agility: Enhanced Human
Reflexes: Enhanced Human
Profession/Rank
(Current): Government security agent, adventurer
Profession/Rank
(Former): Farm hand
Current Alias: Snowflake
Former Alias: N/A
Personal
Weaponry: Waller-Jameson CZSeventy-Five Phased Plasma
Pistol; various others, as needed, provided by EarthGov Security
Usual Base of
Operations: Division Five Center, Oneonta, New York,
NorAm, Earth
Friends/Allies/Confidants: Xavier Bernard, James Browning, Leah
Buchanan, Cheryl Dolan, Teresa Frankel, Murphy Greenfield,
Harmony Moore, Melody Moore, Alexandra Sinclair, Bryan Styles, Marissa
Tolliver
Enemies: Efhram Bartok, Purists
Skills: Carly is a skilled investigator, often
noticing details others miss. She is
skilled in several martial arts, is an expert marksman
and a good pilot.
Special
Abilities: Because she is an Enhanced Human, Carly is
stronger than the average human (approximately
four times stronger). Her senses
are also better than average. Her eyes
are about as good as a cat’s, giving her excellent night vision. (Like a cat’s eyes, Enhanced Human eyes have tapetum lucidum, which reflects light that passes through the retina back into
the eye, increasing the eye’s sensitivity to dim light). Carly can hear a broader range of frequencies
and can pick a single voice out of a crowd.
Her sense of smell is so acute, she can recognize most people by scent.
Source of
Special Abilities: Genetic engineering
Interests/Hobbies:
Murphy
Greenfield
Name: Murphy Greenfield
Race: Human
Age: 32 (as of 23 October, 2189)
Date of Birth: 17 July, 2157
Place of Birth: Brisbane, Australia, Earth
Citizenship: Murphy is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status: No criminal record
Relatives: Jamie Greenfield (father, deceased), Zena
Greenfield (mother, deceased), Roddy Greenfield (grandfather)
Height: 180.34 (5’11”)
Weight: 79.38 kg (175 lbs)
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Sandy Blonde
Religion: Agnostic
Intelligence: Above Average
Strength: Normal
Speed: Normal
Stamina: Normal
Durability: Normal
Agility: Normal
Reflexes: Normal
Profession/Rank
(Current): Government security agent, adventurer
Profession/Rank
(Former): None
Current Alias: Sand
Former Alias: N/A
Personal
Weaponry: Waller-Jameson
CZSeventy-Five Phased Plasma Pistol; various others, as needed, provided
by EarthGov Security
Usual Base of
Operations: Division Five Center, Oneonta, New York,
NorAm, Earth
Friends/Allies/Confidants: Caralynn
Adrasteia, Xavier Bernard, James Browning, Leah Buchanan, Cheryl Dolan, Teresa
Frankel, Harmony Moore, Melody Moore, Alexandra Sinclair, Bryan Styles, Marissa
Tolliver
Enemies: Efhram Bartok, Purists
Skills: Murphy is a skilled agent, trained in several
martial arts. He is also an expert
marksman and a good pilot. He is a good leader, and will often defuse a tense situation with a quick joke.
Special
Abilities: N/A
Source of
Special Abilities: N/A
Interests/Hobbies:
Efhram
Bartok
Name: Efhram Bartok
Race: Enhanced Human (Consectetur Humana)
Age: 15 (actual, as of 23 October, 2189)/early
30’s (apparent)
Date of Birth: 22 September, 2174
Place of Birth: Adam Welles Research Facility, San Francisco,
California, NorAm, Earth
Citizenship: Bartok is a citizen of Earth
Legal Status: Convicted murderer
Relatives: The other forty-nine members of Batch ANFifty
Height: 177.8 cm (5’10”)
Weight: 72.57 kg (160 lbs)
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Religion: Atheist
Intelligence: Genius
Strength: Enhanced Human
Speed: Enhanced Human
Stamina: Enhanced Human
Durability: Enhanced Human
Agility: Enhanced Human
Reflexes: Enhanced Human
Profession/Rank
(Current): N/A
Profession/Rank
(Former): N/A
Current Alias: N/A
Former Alias: N/A
Personal
Weaponry: Various, as needed
Usual Base of
Operations: Mobile
Friends/Allies/Confidants:
Enemies: Caralynn Adrasteia, Xavier Bernard, Murphy
Greenfield
Skills: Bartok is a skilled leader and a persuasive
speaker.
Special
Abilities: Because he is an Enhanced Human, Bartok is
stronger than the average human (approximately four times stronger). His senses are also better than average. His eyes are about as good as a cat’s,
giving him excellent night vision. (Like
a cat’s eyes, Enhanced Human eyes have tapetum
lucidum, which reflects light that passes through the retina back into the eye, increasing
the eye’s sensitivity to dim light). Bartok
can hear a broader range of frequencies and can
pick a single voice out of a crowd. His
sense of smell is so acute, he can recognize
most people by scent.
Source of
Special Abilities: Genetic engineering
Interests/Hobbies:
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