Last night I edited my most recent story, "The End of Seconds". It's the story of the end of one universe, the birth of the next universe and answers that annoying question, so where did God come from?
This is the second editing pass through the story. I realized something while going through it: For the length of the story, I became obsessed with the word hesitated. Everyone was hesitating before speaking. Not anymore.
I don't know how much more editing I'll do on it. It seems pretty tight to me.